March 27- Assessing My Open Response for Reading

Today I’ll be assessing my point of view work (POV) reading response question. The question was: Point Of View for When We Built the Trojan Horse

 #1Evidence from the text underlined in black
– King Priam and prince Paris kidnapped the Spartan queen Helen.
– Spartans came up with a plan to trick the Trojans into letting them come into their city with a gigantic horse.
– The Spartans tricked Trojan goddess Athena.
– So many people died.
– After the war the wooden horse became famous for tricking the city of Troy.

#2 Own ideas underlined in red
–  I think the point of view of the Trojans would be very different because the Trojans are different people.
-Maybe the Trojans didn’t even know that their rulers kidnapped the queen of Sparta.
– When the Trojans came up with the ‘trick’ I think the Trojans would have thought ” Finally the war is over! And what a beautiful gift the Spartans gave us too!”
– If I was a Trojan I would have thought “That’s unfair! We lost the war, our prince died and they got queen Helen! Worst of all they tricked our beloved goddess Athena!”

#3 I have both evidence from the text and my own ideas
Yes, I have  both evidence from the text and my own ideas to support my answer.

#4 Everything is underlined
No, not all of my sentences are underlined. I missed some of my own ideas.

#5 Every sentence is used to answer the question

Almost every sentence is used to answer the question. Most sentences are a little of topic.

Next Steps: How I’m going to bump up my answer

Next time I think my answer could  shorter, Just because a piece of writing is long doesn’t always mean it’s good. I also think that I could add some more evidence from the text.

 

My First Blog Post!

Hello everyone! In today’s blog post I’ll be writing about blogs!I’ll show you how they can help you, how I felt when I found out I was getting a blog!

Blogs can you in help everyday life. You may be wondering why on earth would you even need a blog? Well there a fantastic way to get important information out to the world. I like to call it showing my learning with the world! Then on the other hand there is one con and that is you have to keep up and keep writing new blog posts. But that’s half the fun of having a blog!

Now I’m going to tell you how I felt when I found out I was going to have a blog. ( Sharing my learning with the world.) I was super excited I couldn’t wait to start my very own blog! There are millions of other ways to show your ideas and thoughts with the world too. Such as Twitter, and many other things. ( Just make sure your your old enough and your parents let you first)

Well got to go hope you enjoyed and learned a couple new things! See you next time!